A New Collection Review: Interwoven Narratives of Suffering
Young Freya spends time with her distracted mother in Cornwall when she meets teenage twins. "The only thing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the days that follow, they violate her, then bury her alive, a mix of anxiety and annoyance passing across their faces as they finally liberate her from her improvised coffin.
This could have served as the jarring main event of a novel, but it's only one of numerous horrific events in The Elements, which collects four short novels – released distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters confront historical pain and try to achieve peace in the current moment.
Debated Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's release has been overshadowed by the inclusion of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the preliminary list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other nominees pulled out in protest at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been cancelled.
Conversation of trans rights is absent from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of major issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the influence of traditional and social media, family disregard and sexual violence are all explored.
Distinct Stories of Pain
- In Water, a grieving woman named Willow moves to a remote Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for awful crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a footballer on trial as an participant to rape.
- In Fire, the adult Freya juggles retaliation with her work as a doctor.
- In Air, a father travels to a memorial service with his young son, and wonders how much to divulge about his family's history.
Trauma is accumulated upon pain as wounded survivors seem fated to bump into each other repeatedly for all time
Interconnected Stories
Relationships abound. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one account reappear in houses, bars or legal settings in another.
These narrative elements may sound tangled, but the author understands how to drive a narrative – his prior popular Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been translated into numerous languages. His straightforward prose bristles with gripping hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to experiment with fire"; "the first thing I do when I reach the island is modify my name".
Personality Development and Narrative Power
Characters are sketched in brief, impactful lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes ring with tragic power or perceptive humour: a boy is hit by his father after wetting himself at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of watery tea.
The author's ability of bringing you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an previous story a authentic thrill, for the first few times at least. Yet the collective effect of it all is desensitizing, and at times almost comic: suffering is accumulated upon trauma, chance on coincidence in a dark farce in which hurt survivors seem destined to meet each other repeatedly for all time.
Thematic Complexity and Concluding Evaluation
If this sounds not exactly life and resembling uncertainty, that is aspect of the author's thesis. These damaged people are burdened by the crimes they have endured, trapped in cycles of thought and behavior that churn and plunge and may in turn hurt others. The author has spoken about the influence of his personal experiences of harm and he portrays with understanding the way his cast traverse this perilous landscape, striving for solutions – seclusion, frigid water immersion, resolution or invigorating honesty – that might bring illumination.
The book's "fundamental" structure isn't extremely instructive, while the brisk pace means the exploration of social issues or digital platforms is mostly superficial. But while The Elements is a defective work, it's also a thoroughly accessible, survivor-centered chronicle: a appreciated response to the usual obsession on detectives and perpetrators. The author illustrates how suffering can affect lives and generations, and how years and care can silence its reverberations.